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God

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Elias
on 07-20-2011 at 03:46 AM (421 Views)
hey, i wrote a shitty thing:
This is a story about God. It’s called God.

Scene I: God Greets Maxwell

In the beginning God was profoundly bored. God was so profoundly bored that he created the heavens and the earth, wherein most profound things happened from then on. He made people, too; the profound things happened to them, mostly. But one time a thing happened to Him, and it was pretty profound if He had to say so Himself.
maybe you can read the next few paragraphs and then lose interest by clicking this link: http://db.tt/kbdYaj6

its not good but its the first thing i've ever completed on my own time so thats nice.

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  1. Playare's Avatar
    God was profoundly bored. God was so profoundly boredGod was profoundly bored. God was so profoundly boredGod was profoundly bored. God was so profoundly boredGod was profoundly bored. God was so profoundly bored
  2. BudZer's Avatar
    I've already read part one, and I loved it. Part two left a bit to be desired, but you do really get your point across without seeming to be obnoxious about it. It was intelligent and philosophical, and most of all, it showed tremendous promise for a budding young writer.
  3. Numb's Avatar
    Pretty impressive, babs.
  4. Hofman's Avatar
    That's profoundly good.
  5. Hofman's Avatar
    It made me laugh profoundly.
  6. SportBike55's Avatar
    what is even what
  7. TPB's Avatar

    I lol'd profoundly hard

    cocks/10
  8. continuous reality's Avatar
    i know that smell

    would profoundly sniff again/10
  9. Mk. II's Avatar
    This confirms my accurate musings that there is no point

    I loved that story, man.